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WendyxBebeOrly? by *Freak-Egg:iconFreak-Egg:

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people need to stop telling me what not to draw >8U







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I kinda hate this, so, crits plz 8D

Wendy and Bebe © Trey Parker and Matt Stone

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=allieluvskitties Apr 22, 2009, 6:56:16 AM
I definitely like the deviation. You clearly spent a lot of time coloring this and drawing it. What I would say you should work on with this is that the heads look a little long, and they could be a bit smaller. Other than that, it's a very good picture, and your effort is in plain sight! The hands look a little small as well, I think you could also make their bodies a fraction larger, they look a bit skinny. I definitely like the hair you drew though, it looks very real and it looks like you spent a lot of time on the whole thing. Good work! :3
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~HeadmistressJack Apr 21, 2009, 11:41:08 PM
HAWT :iconimhappyplz: I'm so glad you defied my direct orders to NOT draw this

i like Wendy's nose a lot 8D and the hair on both looks great. i like the arm lengths too, they look pretty accurate.

as negative crits though, i think Bebe's face looks a little long

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~Kuroi-Kiseki Apr 22, 2009, 2:51:50 PM
It's obvious you spent time on this, but it looks like the picture's width was shrunk so everything got a little smooshed.

Otherwise, I can't really complain C: I love the background, the colors, and the shading. Especially on Bebe's hair 8D Idk why exactly, but I just adore it!

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*ClownCarOnFire Apr 22, 2009, 7:46:06 PM
....I missed this one? :noes:


Well...I like it! I don't see these two too often.
They look really good.

Just Bebe's face looks a bit long, which has been stated and maybe be more constant with the shading. Like Wendy's hand is flat.

Other than that, this looks awesome. Awesome practice on kissing pictures. :nod:

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=berrixkisses Apr 23, 2009, 9:56:06 AM
:eyes: I don't think that I have anything to add than what others have already pointed out; so I'll say I agree with the heads seeming too long/squished. Also, I can tell there was planning put into the posing, the pic pulls together very well. Sweet job. :3

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